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renaissance salle de bains

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toilet paper wants to make a hipster out of me.
and all I can really do is translate what I see.
DXM makes bubble boys look awfully sweet.
I talked to Becky she thinks I'm fierce I think I'm
a freak.

I was in this exact place in 2006.

everything whirred and swirled

but I was sober

and she was all I had.

I had art school;

I had instructors;

I don't think they realize half of their kids do drugs while I butter my bread and prepare my show

I want to put my finger back into the pie

I want to rise

the toilet bowl wants to make a hipster out of me
mold my hair all artfully disheveled
lock my locks in uninterrupted sanguine samsara
begone
born free
samsara

Fuck you, Miho Hatori
This is the worst poem ever and for that I apologize. Somehow, I am told to myself by myself that it stands the test of sobriety. Not exactly why, but then I'm never exactly sure of anything. Sorry again. I was under substances of questionable legality and I was overthinking my life on a toilet seat. My pants were down for the entire time I spent on writing this.

I wouldn't attempt to try putting any cohesive message together while reading this. Your brain might sizzle.
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fscked's avatar
I dig it. I'm getting a little rhymesayer vibe from it that's awesome... as I read it my brain put a beat behind it..